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This is not to steal, only to read and critque
This story is from 2010. I am trying to renew it because I did realize how good it was... even if it had some grammer issues :P I have edited all of the chapters and I will post more every week
Warriors: A New Era Allegiances by CeruleanOasis, literature
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Warriors: A New Era Allegiances
Moonclan
Leader: Silverstar- silver tom with unusual spots and green eyes
Deputy: Scartalon- black tom with amber eyes
Apprentice: Tigerpaw
Medicine Cat: Mosspool- pretty light tortoiseshell she-cat with green eyes
Temporary Apprentice: Spottedstorm
Warriors:
Stripedfang- dark orange tabby tom with bright green eyes
Hawkstalker- brown tabby tom with white spots on his paws, chest, and face
Bluedapple- blackish blue she-cat with amber eyes
Rainshadow- gray she-cat with rain colored eyes
Apprentice: Fuzzypaw
Swiftwish- Light orange tabby tom with blue eyes
Apprentices:
Warriors: A New Era (Prologue) by CeruleanOasis, literature
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Warriors: A New Era (Prologue)
Darkness had spread across Moonclan. The stars were covered with the wisps of night time clouds, leaving only the barest shimmer of moonlight to light up the area.
Agony and pain was heard all over the clan. The medicine cat was trying her best to handle all the injured, but more and more kept coming. She couldn't take care of them all.
Amidst all this, three newborn kits were crowding a frail being. They gazed at their mother and watched her become weaker.
"Mother?" one kit whispered.
The mother smiled. She spoke to her mate softly, "Take care of them, Mosspool has told me of their significance. Raise them well, I will always love them..
Warriors: A New Era (Chapter 1) by CeruleanOasis, literature
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Warriors: A New Era (Chapter 1)
"Wow, Spottedpaw, nice job!" Swiftwish exclaimed. As Swiftwish and her apprentice walked over to the fresh-kill pile, Silverstar noticed the food they had brought for the clan.
"Swiftwish, that is a huge amount of fresh-kill for leaf-bare. How did you do it?" Silverstar asked.
"I didn't. I only caught a few squirrels. Spottedpaw did it all!" Swiftwish proclaimed with joy.
Silverstar nudged Swiftwish to the side to talk in privacy. "Do you think she is ready for her test?" Silverstar requested.
"Yes, of course. I believe she is way overdue," Swiftwish responded while digging into a piece of one of the squirrels.
Silverstar nodded. He call
Warriors: A New Era (Chapter 2) by CeruleanOasis, literature
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Warriors: A New Era (Chapter 2)
The two excited apprentices ran to Moonclan's entrance. If it was possible, they would be bouncing off the walls. Silverstar slowly made his way to the entrance hoping not to be trampled on by his kits.
"Okay, who wants to go first?" Silverstar asked.
"You can go Bluepaw," Spottedpaw gracefully said.
Bluepaw nodded.
"Bluepaw, pretend I am a Sunclan warrior. Attack me," Silverstar said.
Bluepaw hesitated, but pounced on Silverstar. She held on with all of her might as Silverstar flailed.
Wow, Silverstar thought.
Next, Bluepaw grabbed on to Silverstar's neck.
"Are you sure that is the right thing to do?" Silverstar yelled. He rolled ove
Warriors: A New Era (Chapter 3) by CeruleanOasis, literature
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Warriors: A New Era (Chapter 3)
The two cats eagerly waited for moonhigh. They would to chew off their legs if that would make time go faster.
"Why are you guys standing here? It's moonhigh," Tigerpaw said.
"Crap!" Spottedpaw yelled.
"Scartalon, grab everyone. There will be a clan meeting," Silverstar meowed. Scartalon ran to the entrance to escort the clan members.
"Gee, I wonder what it is for," Spottedpaw said sarcastically.
Bluepaw looked around frantically, "I don't know!"
Wow, really? Spottedpaw thought.
"Oh sorry, brain fart." Bluepaw said embarrassed. They soon realized they couldn't chat any longer. They had to get on Highstones.
Quickly, Scartalon found
Warriors: A New Era (Chapter 4) by CeruleanOasis, literature
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Warriors: A New Era (Chapter 4)
The two cats found a comfortable spot to sit away from all of the clan.
"What is it Mosspool?" Silverstar asked.
"Well... as you know, I can tell what a cat's potential is just by a glance," Mosspool quietly said.
"Yeah, your special ability, continue," Silverstar stated.
"When your kits were first born, I couldn't help myself but check. I hope you understand why I did not tell you this, but Spottedstorm has a special ability." Mosspool whispered.
"What? That is not possible. If she was a medicine cat or a kit of yours, maybe, but mine?" Silverstar yelled.
"I'm not finished. Her ability is that she can see the future with something that
Warriors: A New Era (Chapter 5) by CeruleanOasis, literature
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Warriors: A New Era (Chapter 5)
The next morning was a very stressful time for Spottedstorm. She thought her first official full day of being a warrior would be more enjoyable. Now that she was aware of her ability, she had to train with Mosspool to control it.
She was proud yet jealous of Bluedapple. She got to have a normal life. However, Spottedstorm was still concerned about what could happen to her sisters. Could it be as bad as death? She was anxious to figure out.
"Good morning Spottedstorm," Mosspool kindly said.
"Hi Mosspool, thanks for helping me," Spottedstorm whispered.
"Helping you with what? You should be on patrol, not chatting with the medicine cat," Str
Warriors: A New Era (Chapter 6) by CeruleanOasis, literature
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Warriors: A New Era (Chapter 6)
The cats started going towards Thorn Hollow looking for a prey. Thorn Hollow was famous for having the best prey in the whole forest. The animals hide in the thorns to keep away predators. Over the years, Moonclan has found a special tunnel to access the whole area.
Spottedstorm was nervous to tell them about the prophecy. She didn't want them to worry about what might happen to them. She still had to tell them. If Silverstar told them, he would screw it up completely.
"Guys, can I talk about something before we start hunting?" Spottedstorm asked.
"Sure, what's on your mind?" Bluedapple mewed.
"You guys are in danger," Spottedstorm whispe
Warriors: A New Era (Chapter 7) by CeruleanOasis, literature
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Warriors: A New Era (Chapter 7)
"What?" Bluedapple asked.
"You heard me? Where were you? Aren't you supposed to be training Spottedstorm?" Silverstar asked loudly.
Spottedstorm was paranoid. She thought that Silverstar could trust her. "I was hungry; I asked any of the warriors if they wanted to hunt with me. Bluedapple and Tigerpaw volunteered," Spottedstorm said.
"Who said you had the right to do that?" Silverstar yelled.
"I am a warrior. Also, Mosspool said I could, she wanted me to grab fresh-kill," She explained while pointing at the motionless squirrel.
"Liar! Lying to your own leader. There must be a punishment... I know! You will be treated as a kit. You will n
Warriors: A New Era (Chapter 8) by CeruleanOasis, literature
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Warriors: A New Era (Chapter 8)
All of the cats gathered. They were confused and asking their clan mates if they knew what it was about. Silverstar and Scartalon stood on top of the largest rock.
"Members of Moonclan. Today has been a very stressful day because of an unlikely warrior," Silverstar continued, "Spottedstorm, my daughter, has lied to us. Don't worry, she has been punished. She will be treated as a kit,"
All the cats stared at Spottedstorm, confused about what a kind cat could have done.
"You're wrong father!" Bluedapple yelled.
Silverstar gave her a nutty look.
"Spottedstorm never lied. She told us the truth! We now know of our danger!" Tigerpaw screamed.